The challenge was this...
Pick something that you
Have found to be very beautiful,
And write about it...
Hands down...no problem
I can write about
Three times in my life,
When words
Could not describe
The incredibly wondrous
Happiness
That I felt inside...
The rosy glow,
The perfect curve
The softness,
Sweet and gentle
The perfection
And the awe...
My children's first smiles!
This is beautiful Dee. Such a clever build-up to a delightful ending. A lovely, lovely poem. Well done. A pleasure to read. Love Ernestine XXX
Hiya Dee... so gorgeous - hope they weren't challenged with nationality disorders... One Peace at a Time... Deana
It is a challenge Dee.. write about it... write about those beautiful angelic smiles.
Very sweet, although that may be three continual challenges, I think. - chuck
Not only did you rise to the challenge, but in your own gifted style and grace, you rose above it, well done sweet-heart, this is so gentle Love duncan X
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful Dee - there is nothing quite like those first sweet smiles of innocence and contentment. Justine