The Challenge Poem by Dee Daffodil

The Challenge

Rating: 5.0


The challenge was this...
Pick something that you
Have found to be very beautiful,
And write about it...

Hands down...no problem
I can write about
Three times in my life,
When words
Could not describe

The incredibly wondrous
Happiness
That I felt inside...

The rosy glow,
The perfect curve
The softness,
Sweet and gentle
The perfection
And the awe...

My children's first smiles!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R H 10 August 2006

Beautiful Dee - there is nothing quite like those first sweet smiles of innocence and contentment. Justine

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Ernestine Northover 10 August 2006

This is beautiful Dee. Such a clever build-up to a delightful ending. A lovely, lovely poem. Well done. A pleasure to read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Tailor Bell 11 August 2006

overflows with warmth, Dee. nice read. -Tailor

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Emancipation Planz 08 October 2007

Hiya Dee... so gorgeous - hope they weren't challenged with nationality disorders... One Peace at a Time... Deana

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Mpho Petrus Manwedi 25 September 2006

It is a challenge Dee.. write about it... write about those beautiful angelic smiles.

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Chuck Audette 18 August 2006

Very sweet, although that may be three continual challenges, I think. - chuck

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Brian Dorn 14 August 2006

Mostly the awe... great write, Dee! Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 11 August 2006

Not only did you rise to the challenge, but in your own gifted style and grace, you rose above it, well done sweet-heart, this is so gentle Love duncan X

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