The Dream Or The Nightmare - (Cycle - Poetry For My Friends) Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

The Dream Or The Nightmare - (Cycle - Poetry For My Friends)

Rating: 5.0


everything is a nightmare
and it stood on its head
you will believe
what you will want
I wonit help you


I sent the old song
on 'fortunate way'
and I don`t already want to know
and to see nothing I don`t want
you perhaps but I will


and that it not so how
you think so and
I ask you to come back
when for me then again will
have a dream about you


(for HN)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Barbara Korynt 01 April 2009

wonit = won`t - typographical error (1 strophe 5 line) . I not counting it as the mistake, it is happening during writing quite often. Poem thought over and very good. Excellent record. :)

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