Abhinav Baruah

Rookie - 25 Points (January 31 / Jorhat)

The Executive - Poem by Abhinav Baruah

I wear my blue checkered white shirt
And fasten a tie on neck
Just to hide my worn out heart and flawless cracks
I am twenty first century’s executive
Results of capital and other exclusive


Comments about The Executive by Abhinav Baruah

  • Rookie Michael Brock (4/9/2010 8:00:00 AM)

    I like your wording in this very much. I will enjoy reading this again, and I plan to send to a friend who is trying on that tie right now. Beautifully worded.

    thanks
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  • Rookie Tatyana Gubaydullina (4/3/2010 11:09:00 AM)

    I enjoed it very much, but, as English is foreign to me, there is something I didn't catch - 'flawless cracks'. Would you be so kind to explain this to me? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/2/2010 6:23:00 AM)

    I am twenty first century’s executive
    Results of capital and other exclusive..this is definitely new concept and cult too. to prove to world something essential and new....10

    read mine ..good mornig boss... i miss (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 28, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, April 9, 2010


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