The God made by them
long ago started cracking
in course of time.
Some busy mending it,
some immersed it
in the river,
some running amok.
Yes! ! Seeing the ways of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, some running amok and some making others run amok. There are very few who remain firm on their faith and do not weigh it with the allegiance of others. Thanks.
Faith creates everything including God.......a lovely analysis made in your poem...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Some busy mending, some immersed it in the river, some running amok..the pictures of God that all of u s have in our minds.......... very symbolic writing my dear poet Akham thank u. tony