Take my love, dear
And don't hold on too long
For I must go somewhere
Where the guns and tanks roam
And in the trenches, I will be reminded of you
As I breathe my last
I'll remember yr kiss the best, my love
Until the cry of the dove
LeeAnn, you have so brilliantly created a masterful work of art on the themes of bittersweet love and war. Truly outstanding!
A sad and lovely portrayal of a final memory of love on the battlefield.5 stars
Fantastic poetry! I am reminded of the famous ballad The Highwayman, in the poetic standard and emotiveness of the poem. Loved it, LeeAnn. Top score
No war but it's full of love till the last breath; nice to read
Thank you LeeAnn for this touching poem.......10 + To my favourite
War is always tragic whether one wins or loses. A sad but truthful poem written with intense feeling.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great war poem LeeAnn. Too marks.