Alfred Ramos

Rookie (3-2-1945 / California)

The Honey Bee And The Rose - Poem by Alfred Ramos

The honey bee hovered over the rose
Waiting for it to bloom
Seeking its daily bread I suppose
Before the rose could adorn a room
A butterfly
Hang around nearby
Coordinating its next vector
For the leftover nectar
The honey bee took charge
When the rose stretched its petals to the sky
First in line before the barrage
A nosedive straight into the rose’s eye
A blue jay and a sparrow
Perched high upon a telephone wire
Sang their song of sorrow
As the scene below was catching fire
The honey bee forgot
About the crown of thorns
But the rose did not
A rose lives for the palace it adorns
How this story end everybody knows
You don’t mess around with a rose
The honey bee got itself into a Gordian knot
A minor sting is all that it got


Comments about The Honey Bee And The Rose by Alfred Ramos

  • Rookie - 258 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/1/2008 12:26:00 AM)

    a sting for a stinging bee...good...good poem, Alfred...nice message blooming 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, October 20, 2008


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