The Last Breath Of Friendship Poem by soy romillo

The Last Breath Of Friendship



Being your Friend is such an honor

We are together in happiness and in sorrow

But now that you are leaving this world...

And you are now going to unhold your sword..



A friend like you must be kept.

Inside my heart where you'll be safe

I think of you night and day

When we're together i have many things to say



We are in each company always

Everyday with you there are no mazes

And i am secure to tell you secrets

'Cause i know you wont reveal it



But when yo tell me 'I'm dying'

I was shock the same time I'm crying

I looked for nothing in the air

I felt sad and i have nothing to say



But the day came and it happened

The thing that i am very afraid of..

But everything has its own end

God took you and also your soul.



So those who are reading this letter

Say for what you feel to him or her

'Cause really our life is just lended

So tell your feelings before the end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aira Olayvar 19 January 2010

The message of the poem is good, but it should not have been entitled “Ended Friendship”… ended friendship is good to use if someone has been hurt by the one being called a friend and so they break the bond of friendship for bad reasons… it should have been “Friends Till the End” or “Eternal Friendship” or “The last breath of friendship”. Just not ended friendship… anyways, mine is just a suggestion, it was still written well. Thanks by way... :)

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