The Last Cut Poem by Billy Loving

The Last Cut

Rating: 5.0


Such sweet pain
Coursing through my brain
As I watch the blood drain

Staring up at the sky
Waiting to die
To stand, no need to try

No one around
Not even a sound
Too late, I'll be found

Wiping the sweat from my face
Awaiting sleep's embrace
Lying here in my final resting place

Saturday, January 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 18 January 2020

Really a poignant bit of verse on the final moments of suicide written with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Billy.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success