***********the Love Sensing Poem by sarwar chowdhury

***********the Love Sensing

Rating: 4.3


(‘God manifests Himself to the heart of the Perfect Man, who is His vicegerent.
And the reflection of the lights of His self-manifestation overflows into the world’
-Ibn Arabi’s Naqsh al Fusus)

Concerned
…………Confirmed
………………….THE MAN
……………………Ardent follower can
………………………………That transcending
………………………Angels singing
……………….Unprecedented
…………..Divine bid
……Lovely heart
Things
To move apart.
Times
No fix
Present past future commix
………..The essence
………………..The quintessence
………………………………Get into the sense.

Actually
Gradually
Transient facts evaporating..
Cleansing refreshing very carefully..
Joyfully..Dancing…the love sensing…Enchanting beauties chorous..
The beloved with great pleasure ready to embrace…..HE will do whatever HE likes….

I am in LOVE o dear come, you the ‘zero to nine’
O greatest light the everbright let me shine to shine.

-July-2009

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Piyush Sharma 21 July 2009

your poem has a deep meaning. As we move towards realization, all transient thoughts evaporate and what remains is just love. Until we have our big Ego, we cannot enjoy the embrace of God. But as our ego dissolves, we shine just to shine. Wow. What a wonderful piece of work.

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Crystle Jones 22 July 2009

very deep and meaningful. i love it.10+

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Lynda Robson 22 July 2009

Meaningful deep piece, well versed 10 Lynda xx

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Surya . 22 July 2009

very high on love of god.meaningfuly presented. words well selected. this para cap it all 'I am in LOVE o dear come, you the ‘zero to nine’ O greatest light the everbright let me shine to shine.' voted10 surya

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 July 2009

Qouting Ibn Arabi, and then into the modern idiom, the format. Well different and fascinating.10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 March 2010

‘…Present past future commix ………..The essence ………………..The quintessence ………………………………Get into the sense….’ A figurative poem is trendy…but contents are conglomerate of 2 makes perfect pairs… ‘…I am in LOVE o dear come…’ a very simple guileless and nascent approach … free from any blemish…nice read thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10++

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 29 October 2009

Shining and glittering both in the concept and ‘doodles style’ presentation. Ten++ dr.sakti. Please visit my page and comment

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Marvin Brato 06 August 2009

Sincere and deliberate a kind of poetry quite unique real sentiments here portrayed with zealous passionate messages a poetic expressions so exquisite roar with an instinctive wisdom

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Seema Chowdhury 29 July 2009

very nice and different from all other poems you wrote. well done.

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Mubeen Sadhika 28 July 2009

Awesome. The form is amazing. Unbelievably electrifying.

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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