The Magic Of Life Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

The Magic Of Life

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I feel, love in this world is like a dream
That at times threatens to be mighty true,
Rising higher from the humdrum like cream,
Disappearing then like a drop of dew;
Or at times feel, life is an onion peel,
You need will and vision both ways to see,
And aught with its apparent conflict deal,
For, world is both a myth and reality.
You sure see a plume of smoke but no fire,
And plumes do take many a form and shape,
If fire is not seen how can you the pyre?
Rid all logic— discard that robe you drape.
Life's all magic. Logic has not a clue:
Seed's tree, flower's fruit, or two cells and you!
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Sonnets | 12.12.2017 |

Monday, March 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,life,love,magic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 11 March 2019

Excellent poem, nicely written.10+++ my fav lines: Rising higher from the humdrum like cream, Disappearing then like a drop of dew; Or at times feel, life is an onion peel

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 March 2019

Thank you so much Mohammed Nehal for the feedback so liberally given.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 March 2019

Thank you Rose Maries for a twain of appreciating notes, quite uplifting the spirit.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 March 2019

Liked the following lines that impart wisdom, to wit: " You need will and vision both ways to see And aught with its apparent conflict deal For, world.is both a myth and reality." Brilliant lines from a great poem.10+++++onto my Poem List

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 March 2019

So very true. Love and life hold us spellbound. Their intricacies always caught us unaware. A beautifully crafted write full of wisdom.

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C F 11 March 2019

Very nice poem on life and love.... well written. Love the last two lines: Life's all magic. Logic has not a clue: Seed's tree, flower's fruit, or two cells and you!

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 March 2019

Mine too, Chito Faustino, thank you so much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 March 2019

This world is just like dream and this dream gives amazing effect. Life rises higher and higher. Life is just like logical magic. This poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 March 2019

Yes it is dream-like, thank you Kumarmani Mahakul.

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