The New Guy Poem by Tiffany Wolf

The New Guy

Rating: 5.0


I found someone new and he seems totally sweet,
He's funny nice and I can't wait 'til we finally meet!
He's the one who makes me laugh and he also makes me smile,
Even when I'm in a bad mood or in the thickest part of denile.
He must be cute and his soul must be as deep as an abyss,
I'm afraid to face the day where it'll be him i will have to miss.
He pulls me up when I am down and through when i can't see,
He is what I want for the moment, I want him here right beside me.
He does what I do and maybe even more,
He is the guy I want, treasure and adore.
Our feelings for each other are not that strong,
But these feelings, I know, are not wrong!
He tells me I'm kind and can make him laugh,
But is this the truth or just something that's cut in half.
He seems true and his words seem legit,
His heart and mine, for now, seem to be a perfect fit.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyler Dee 25 January 2009

girls think this way about me...i like it but at the same time i hate it. the poem is great but its proof girls are fools

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John Smith 22 January 2009

Very happy for you! And great rhythm and flow

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 January 2009

As a rhythm and rhymer, I am mighty impressed by this poem. I can hardly imagine the thing being better. A couple of the rhymes were excellant. I really like this and I recommend it to others. It is a keeper, whether the boy is or not. GW62

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Dark Gurl 55 21 January 2009

lol.. so u found him haa..! ! fantastic poem..well done..

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