# 'The Obvious' Poem by Daffodil Decarie

# 'The Obvious'



Faved upon poem hunter's obvious
Friendliness among hunters and hunted
Fogs fair cognitions of thoughtfulness

For some reason - Many a spoken prayers
I mean, 'just a spoken prayers' fruitless
But acknowledged by needs, a cry out of
Flattery- a vain soliloquy - a prayer

To a God, whose image remain eristic
Among -prayers- said to be truthful.
How come we are so succussed?
By prayers - susceptible- swollen in nature.


Finding myself bespeaking for truth
Feels like walking barefoot on fiery charcoals
Forbidden to jump over -theories & conclusions-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 21 October 2007

I think you've placed a finger on the pulse of it with great flair here... Rgds, Ivan

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