The Old Sad Song Poem by Little Red Apple

The Old Sad Song

Rating: 5.0


Again from my eyes
Tears were falling down
Is it a naivety having you on my own?
Accompanying me to get through that way
Just till the twilight of this day

Words of your reason
I've heard quite often
Don't you know it hurts me more?
Makes me to feel more of my sore

We've been together enough long
Why do you still sing for me this old sad song?
I'm sure you feel its hurt too
But why d'you still hum that old song for me and you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Min Sia 21 January 2009

Oh there's something wrong..the reason why he continue to sing that old sad song... Very well penned..emotions uplifted... Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem!

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Mimi Fakhira 29 January 2009

I can picture the moments you described in your poem... and that is very good! You've got a nice style of writing, keep it up! 10/10 MIMI

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 30 January 2009

hey, a wonderful poem. very touching. truly. thank you friend.

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Ency Bearis 30 January 2009

beautiful write..and nice creativity...10

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Fiona Davidson 30 January 2009

nice poem....thanks....

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Kesav Easwaran 29 January 2009

yes...really so...that's a nice question nice request, Little...what a disturbed soul often wants is not soothing words but sweet response to revive the sagging spirit...beautiful write...10

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Brianna Trombley 29 January 2009

very touching and filled wth emotion, it makes me sad reading it, wonderful poem tho

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