The Old Scarecrow Poem by Stug Jordan

The Old Scarecrow

Rating: 5.0


Retired from the fields of corn,
the old scarecrow stands
abandoned on the lawn;
old ropes, binding his hands.

Almost ashamed to be wearing
the ripped cap on his straw head,
his tall shadow tearing
sunlight from the flowerbed.

He stands, surrounded by the flock,
laughing at his disgrace:
even the baby sparrows mock
his scarf-hidden face.

Clinging to the wooden stake,
his stiff stick neck tied,
and arms spread, wide awake
in the soil – crucified.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jack Tex 13 April 2007

What a moving poem. I liked it a lot, one thumb up for your view and 'nother for your pregnant imagination.

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Cj Heck 13 April 2007

Hello Stug, This is excellent writing - I especially enjoyed the personification used here. Very nice job. Love, CJ

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Marilyn Shepperson 13 April 2007

A sad but beautiful poem. Marilyn

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Danny Reynolds 13 April 2007

The enduring image from this (for me) is the shadow tearing sunlight from the flowerbed. Great image. Danny

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