The Orphan Poem by Billy Loving

The Orphan

Rating: 5.0


Forlorn little boy
Playing with his toy
Sadness, he can't hide
Peering through the window from inside

World so cold
His story untold
Parentless child
Ride so wild

Some liquor sent
Through the snow they went
Driver fighting with the steering wheel inside
Sudden uncontrollable slide

Off the road they go
Over the bank through the snow
Striking the tree with a sudden smack
World turning black

Strapped within the seat
Loss of consciousness complete
Hearing a faint voice
To live is the choice

Door standing ajar
Being pulled from the car
Parent's pale blankly starring face
Vivid memory unable to erase

Thursday, November 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margaret O Driscoll 03 January 2016

Such a sad piece so well expressed Billy!

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Wes Vogler 08 December 2015

last stanza line 3 starring/staring Good poem thank you....................

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