The Path Was Narrow! Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

The Path Was Narrow!

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Sorrow,
The path was narrow!
Facing the odds of life;
Struggling along,
Able to follow the truth.

Hallow!
Not with an arrow;
Shallow,
To allow in the truth;
Able to follow after righteous laws.

To swallow the pill of the truth! !
Facing life with your works;
Sorrow,
The struggle!
Pains of life,
Chains all around,
But, the path was narrow.

Tuesday, March 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,rhyme,struggle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 March 2018

Yes, we must face the odds of life and follow the truth and righteous laws. A nice write that conveys an important message.

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