Jak Black


The Poetess. - Poem by Jak Black

She dips her quill in to her soul
As she prepares her script.
The words she forms, so delicately,
Raw emotion doth depict.

Her words reflect her inner self.
On each line she bares her heart.
Each stanza drawn from deep
Within, to release poetic art.

Her poems paint a picture clear,
To drape in my mind's hall.
With rhythmic meter beating
Time, like music at a ball.


Comments about The Poetess. by Jak Black

  • Rookie - 422 Points Ravi A (4/21/2015 12:05:00 AM)

    Very poetic. You might have presented this poem from two planes. One plane is the poet-poetess appreciative levels and the second level is your own lover being described from this very poetic angle. The last stanza is really suggestive of this, but, once again, this could be the poet-poetess appreciate level. Thus, you have very nicely presented the poem that could be read from two planes. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 17,401 Points Kim Barney (4/20/2015 6:25:00 PM)

    Very well written, Jak. Congrats on Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,505 Points Bharati Nayak (4/20/2015 9:56:00 AM)

    She dips her quill into her soul
    As she prepares her script- - - - -beautiful expression. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,285 Points Brian Stafford (4/20/2015 9:07:00 AM)

    Excellent poem Jak! congrats on getting poem of the day as well! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,852 Points John Richter (4/20/2015 7:02:00 AM)

    We certainly need a 'like' button here.... Nice poem..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,840 Points Lyn Paul (4/20/2015 6:52:00 AM)

    Wonderful words flowing beautifully. Fabulous 1st line too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,909 Points Phil Soar (4/20/2015 4:42:00 AM)

    Congratulations on your poem of the day Jak. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,685 Points Kelly Kurt (4/20/2015 2:50:00 AM)

    A apt description of the art, Jak. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,096 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (4/20/2015 2:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful expression about poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,521 Points Bri Edwards (4/12/2015 1:38:00 PM)

    how to describe this? very poetic? romantic? i don't know. nicely done, with fine rhymes. script/depict....super!

    favorite lines:

    Her poems paint a picture clear,
    To drape in my mind's hall.
    With rhythmic meter beating
    Time, like music at a ball................. especially mind's hall

    i prefer more comedy, sex, or action of any kind in poems, but this is so good as is, that i'll send it to MyPoemList anyway. bri :)

    i wonder if you wrote this in less than 15 minutes. hmm? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,009 Points Clarence Prince (11/14/2014 6:46:00 PM)

    A very good poem! Well done, Jak! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,941 Points Smoky Hoss (11/7/2014 3:13:00 PM)

    Superb sentiments, beautifully expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,256 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/6/2014 6:50:00 PM)

    The words she forms, so delicately,
    Raw emotion doth depict... nice lines

    the words flow
    as wind's blow
    they pour in
    as if to rush and win (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,702 Points Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (11/6/2014 6:42:00 PM)

    Her words reflect her inner self.
    On each line she bares her heart.
    Each stanza drawn from deep
    Within, to release poetic art. Great honour towards poetesses of world. Great tribute definitely. It makes a poetess like me very emotional that very deeply felt one poetic mind from inner core of heart. Excellent work shared in this forum. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,896 Points Hazel Durham (11/6/2014 5:56:00 AM)

    So beautifully written Jak with stunning lines expressed with great creativity!
    I'm really lookong forward to reading more of your superb poems Jak! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 5, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 6, 2014


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