I find myself transfixed by the most amazing portrait
And as I examine it with a critics eye
I become more aware of the depth
And the detail on the surface
One detail stands out and I focus on it
Feeling the emotion behind it and learning from it
And I can see the complexity deep within it
Then as my consciousness broadens again
A different, but equally fascinating detail
Grabs me and pulls me back in
Again and again this process takes me
And weaves a spell around my soul
Linking me to the image before my eyes
The portrait that is your true spirit
The most beautiful and enthralling image…
You.
Breathtaking. The reader shares your breathtaking moment. A stunning, tender, admiring (nay, worshipful) piece of pure romanticism... grand. t x
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I would like to translate this poem
I agree with Tara - really tender but also so well structured, Steve