The Positive Mind Poem by David Harris
The Positive Mind
Sailing on a ship of memories
Over the tide of broken dreams
Hear the wail of the lost souls
Who just linger there
Each day we fight to hold a place
In an unforgiving world
That cast aside the failures
To an unrelenting tide
Every mountain is scaleable
If you really want to try
No goal is unattainable
To the positive mind
(18 April 2007)
I hear you David You speak words of wisdom. My sorrows and lies I have imprissoned, building my walls so high. I'm longing to be forgiven, and for this I pray.....Oh Lord in heaven...sustain me in possitive minded ways..... You do have a calling David.....your words touch many people : O)
Poured across the screen like fine oil, beautiful, soft undertones all set with a creative- thinking behind the scenes, ah, tis David a positive message from one of poem-hunters finest Take care my friend Love duncan X
Impeccable work, David. I love the emotion and attitude in this piece. Ari :)
David, as always, a magnificient pice of writing! You are so engaging in your work! A ten from me, Theo
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5/4/2024 7:36:10 AM # 1.0.0.1119
There is no try, Do or do not... Master Yoda.. The force is strong in this one...10