The Seer (Chapter 10) Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

The Seer (Chapter 10)

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"Anyway, " he continued, "I didn't know
about the bet until afterward, and
my dad was really furious with me
when I didn't win the game."

"But you didn't lose, either, " I said.
"Shouldn't that mean that the bet is
canceled and that neither side pays? "

"That's not how it works, " he said.
"The bet was that I would win, and
I didn't, so Dad still has to pay."

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

The next day I went to Charlie's house
before sunup because we were going
to walk up to Water Canyon and go
fishing. He wasn't outside waiting.

I gently tapped on his window,
thinking he must have overslept.
There was no response. I looked in
the driveway and the family car was gone.

I didn't feel like going fishing alone. I
walked back home and put my fishing
pole away. A few hours later I noticed
a U-Haul truck in front of Charlie's house.

(To be continued)

The Seer (Chapter 10)
Saturday, March 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: friends,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is not a poem. It is one chapter of a short story. It is suggested that the reader read the chapters in order, although each chapter should be able to stand on its own even if you haven't read the others.

EXCEPTION: This chapter and 11a are really one chapter. Poem Hunter has apparently started new size limits and I had to break this chapter into two parts.

Just find chapter 01, read it and then click the 'next poem' button, which will get you the next chapter.


This is a work of fiction, although some of the people and places (and events)are real. Charlie is a fictional character, totally made up. I have never known anyone like the person he is described as being.


(This chapter was written in Recife, Brazil,20 September 2015)
Recently I noticed a couple of typos and tried to correct them. When I pushed "submit" I got this message:

THE POEM CONTAINS NOT ALLOWED WORDS. PLEASE CONTACT US.

I did contact them and they said they would get back to me "soon". They never did. So then I tried submitting a couple of paragraphs at a time to find the offensive words. When I got the message above again, there was no way any of the words I just added could be offensive, so I decided that PH must now have a size limit on poems. I submitted this chapter in two separate sections and had no problems.

30 March 2019
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
wes vogler 19 April 2019

interesting your personal fight with machines I avoid unwanted sound tracks by leaving the sound track off permanently. My personal gripe at the moment is YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED DUPLICATE COMMENTS which is never the case.

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