anushmadhu P.Bharathi


' The Silence' - Poem by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

Silence is a celestial message
Silence is a capsule form
Of feelings and emotions;

Words are not powerful expression.
Words could not perform emotions -But
Silence is a powerful weapon;
It does the job in the way of meaning.

Thee connectivity
Through words is precarious.
Words reach others-But
Message stay with you;
Others paint your words
They render other than what you mean.

The impacts modify your words
But the impact is not your intention,
Silences build your confidence
Words build choices for others
Hence
‘ Words can be destroyed-but
Silence cannot be defeated.’


Comments about ' The Silence' by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (1/31/2010 5:24:00 PM)

    a brilliant theme, I like it...

    The silence: an ELOQUENT language
    His lips: EYES,
    His tongue: HEART&SOUL...

    ThanksForSharing/
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  • Rookie Yamini Peethambaran (1/29/2010 12:18:00 PM)

    good one i liked the capture.... but dont you think you could make it more intensive... i could sense that you have the power to do it... go ahead... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Anju Addanki (1/25/2010 8:11:00 AM)

    This a very true poems and yes silence is horrible weapon which kills u silently. A good one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 282 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (1/25/2010 7:55:00 AM)

    Interesting view on how 'Silence' can be precious. It can have a positive impact whenever it is a way towards reflection or contemplation. We would say that 'Silence' and 'Talking' might be taken as 'the two sides of the same coin'. The point is we should be able to discern between both...
    Thank you.
    Best regards. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 990 Points Sadiqullah Khan (1/23/2010 3:56:00 AM)

    This is prose I think with repetitions, a very good attempt at the subject indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 228 Points John Shea (1/22/2010 5:51:00 PM)

    You know? The silence is welcome in my aura. So, don't stand so close to me! A ten from the Pup. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (1/22/2010 10:04:00 AM)

    Yes, Silence cannot be defeated, , , Silence is often much better than talking, however Talking is an important way to express yourself, and both silence and talking are a double edged weapon..
    Great presentation about the silence.Merna (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deenadayalu Peri (1/22/2010 7:27:00 AM)

    ‘ Words can be destroyed-but
    Silence cannot be defeated.’
    The beauty of the verses are these two lines.
    It gives the meaning of your thinking in different time and moments.
    Deenan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alf Hutchison (1/19/2010 2:37:00 PM)

    What a brilliant topic...silence...a very thought prevoking write...thank you for the invite Regards Alf (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deanna Holcomb (1/19/2010 12:28:00 PM)

    I love the vision of the world so mischiefly diplayed through your work. I envy your gift for the art of poetry sir. I want to be like you when I grow up!


    'The impacts modify your words
    But the impact is not your intention,
    Silences build your confidence
    Words build choices for others
    Hence
    ‘ Words can be destroyed-but
    Silence cannot be defeated.’'

    Beautifully said... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynn Glover (1/19/2010 11:03:00 AM)

    A very meaningful poem proving silence is the best policy. A very good write. Your poem pal Lynn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Beauty Philosophy (1/19/2010 4:54:00 AM)

    A well penned poem conveying a strong message. You are absolutely right, words tainted with lies and mask nowadays can no longer convey emotions and real intentions... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (1/18/2010 8:00:00 PM)

    And this weapon is very fatal when used against your near and dear ones.I prefer silence as the powerful medium to reach your inner self. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (1/18/2010 7:53:00 PM)

    And this weapon is very fatal when used against your near and dear ones.I prefer silence as the powerful medium to reach your inner self. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (1/18/2010 7:52:00 PM)

    And this weapon is very fatal when used against your near and dear ones.I prefer silence as the powerful medium to reach your inner self. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Manuel Odeny (1/17/2010 9:21:00 AM)

    Wonderful, deafening silence beautifully potrayed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashley Hargett (1/15/2010 12:39:00 PM)

    very well thot... i like your work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie trop pour trop peu (1/15/2010 11:11:00 AM)

    silence, the secret told but never heard, i like this, you'll get this, i am sure (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rania Hammoud (1/15/2010 9:45:00 AM)

    Hi.A nice one.I liked most the last two lines.And for the occassion someone says>I say my best when i say nothing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Annabel Sheila (1/14/2010 2:28:00 PM)

    Very astute write! Silence is indeed golden. Sometimes a lot more can be said without words.

    Anna (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 12, 2010



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