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' The Silence'

Silence is a celestial message
Silence is a capsule form
Of feelings and emotions;

Words are not powerful expression.
Words could not perform emotions -But
Silence is a powerful weapon;
It does the job in the way of meaning.

Thee connectivity
Through words is precarious.
Words reach others-But
Message stay with you;
Others paint your words
They render other than what you mean.

The impacts modify your words
But the impact is not your intention,
Silences build your confidence
Words build choices for others
Hence
‘ Words can be destroyed-but
Silence cannot be defeated.’

Submitted: Tuesday, January 12, 2010


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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (1/31/2010 5:24:00 PM)

    a brilliant theme, I like it...

    The silence: an ELOQUENT language
    His lips: EYES,
    His tongue: HEART&SOUL...

    ThanksForSharing/
    Feten

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  • Yamini Peethambaran (1/29/2010 12:18:00 PM)

    good one i liked the capture.... but dont you think you could make it more intensive... i could sense that you have the power to do it... go ahead...

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  • Anju Addanki (1/25/2010 8:11:00 AM)

    This a very true poems and yes silence is horrible weapon which kills u silently. A good one.

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  • Maria C. Costa (1/25/2010 7:55:00 AM)

    Interesting view on how 'Silence' can be precious. It can have a positive impact whenever it is a way towards reflection or contemplation. We would say that 'Silence' and 'Talking' might be taken as 'the two sides of the same coin'. The point is we should be able to discern between both...
    Thank you.
    Best regards.

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  • Sadiqullah Khan (1/23/2010 3:56:00 AM)

    This is prose I think with repetitions, a very good attempt at the subject indeed.

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  • John Shea (1/22/2010 5:51:00 PM)

    You know? The silence is welcome in my aura. So, don't stand so close to me! A ten from the Pup.

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  • Merna Ibrahim (1/22/2010 10:04:00 AM)

    Yes, Silence cannot be defeated, , , Silence is often much better than talking, however Talking is an important way to express yourself, and both silence and talking are a double edged weapon..
    Great presentation about the silence.Merna

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  • Deenadayalu Peri (1/22/2010 7:27:00 AM)

    ‘ Words can be destroyed-but
    Silence cannot be defeated.’
    The beauty of the verses are these two lines.
    It gives the meaning of your thinking in different time and moments.
    Deenan

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  • Alf Hutchison (1/19/2010 2:37:00 PM)

    What a brilliant topic...silence...a very thought prevoking write...thank you for the invite Regards Alf

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  • Deanna Holcomb (1/19/2010 12:28:00 PM)

    I love the vision of the world so mischiefly diplayed through your work. I envy your gift for the art of poetry sir. I want to be like you when I grow up!


    'The impacts modify your words
    But the impact is not your intention,
    Silences build your confidence
    Words build choices for others
    Hence
    ‘ Words can be destroyed-but
    Silence cannot be defeated.’'

    Beautifully said...

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