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Unwritten Soul

A Few Words

A few words
Could bring more than a sound
Touch the ears turn wry to golden smile
or sharper than a glass to cut into pieces

Winding up a road between us
Separating emotions out of mind from the case
Would be wrong to let ego reign the grace
How ignorant sometimes heart could be?
Deaf two ears, and blinding opened eyes
Pretend the silence is your voice
Avoiding you is not a choice

A curse of few words
Lead a way to stray from the truth
A plead for apologizing replied by ignoring
A few words used for fighting and shouting and hurting
Standing still but beautifully broken
I looked into your eyes and surprised
In a mirror of a story without lies
Heard...listened a word...'sorry'
Encodes a meaning of 'Forgive me'
No, your lips tightly sealed
It is your voice within sent to me

A few words
I used as the sharp glass tease
Cut you deeply, and you bleed
Saw it all behind the naked eyes
But you still standing to hold me
Never mind how wrong i can be
How i can find a magic in a few words
To heal your pain stained and clot
Regretting how wrong i did to you
To believe unreal and count your tears
I never thought so hurtful this way
When i thinking of myself it linking to you
I hurting myself whenever i hurt you

A few words
I tried to search for proper sorry
Would you blind your eyes, deaf two ears?
Words crime sound nothing but now i fear?
It fears me as i don't to lose you
...Forget the past and start a new
we never meant to be hurt...
You replied with A few words
In form of softness creating golden smile
Your sweet words neutralize the voice of bile
I learned how to speak when i was a child
But just understanding 'A few words' now

Lesson of learning to understand
If i can turn back each time i hurt you
Will avoid this bruises stamp on you
Now, between this winding road
As i standing at the aisle of choices
Picking either Emotions or Mind
Decided to fuse, balance these two
A relevant choice for not to hurt you
Sanity tell all to me,
We meet not to wait this end
We born to be happy till the end of time

A few words
Powerful or hurtful
Time to choose...

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The twisted story just for a write to point what
words can do..for me it's better silent than let
people hurt by our words, unless we make say it better
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Submitted: Friday, February 11, 2011
Edited: Friday, September 09, 2011

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  • Akhtar Jawad (6/19/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    These are words which give a wound deeper than a sword, again these are words which heal up the deepest wounds. Words when beautifully used create a poem like this. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/4/2014 11:25:00 PM)

    ....your words are really articulate and powerful, the beautiful words have a soothing effect..and poem conveys a beautiful message....... (Report) Reply

  • Abhishek Mishra (10/1/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    I don't think I am eligible enough to comment on such a poem...salute to you from the core of my heart. (Report) Reply

  • Dee Corpolongo (9/30/2013 2:05:00 AM)

    Soul, I love the meaning you are conveying in this emotional poem, and I also wrote a similar poem, 'Words'
    if you ever get a chance to read it, you will see we feel very similar in what words mean. excellent write! (Report) Reply

  • Liliana ~el (9/9/2013 4:27:00 PM)

    Love this! ! ! !
    Decided to fuse, balance these two
    A relevant choice for not to hurt you (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2013 8:24:00 AM)

    Words are so can cut as sharp as knife and sweet words can do wonders...Beautiful write.Loved reading it. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/17/2013 8:56:00 PM)

    Words can either build up or tear down, wound or heal. When we use it
    we must do so ever so carefully. You covered this subject very well.
    I invite you to read my poem The Fiery Tongue. Loved this. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan (6/2/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    Words have great power. All human knowledge, emotions and philosophy is communicated trough words. You learned how to use words in childhood, good. I enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Anoop Nair (4/7/2013 8:30:00 AM)

    This is by far one of the best(I am no big poet or something to comment but still) .Looks like you put your heart and soul into it (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (11/30/2012 12:05:00 AM)

    A few words
    Powerful or hurtful
    Time to choose... marvellous poetry and you concluded the poem very wonderfully....i love it... (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (11/28/2012 1:31:00 AM)

    the moon rises over my sunset
    but it is my dark side turned to you
    there dwells sad and coldness
    fraught in fear from you
    as our words fall and crumble
    like the castle of our dreams
    nothing was ever but a water coloring
    streaked in my tears and washed away
    in the rains of you words (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (10/30/2012 7:11:00 PM)

    love the poem and the added poets notes also..these lines
    are my favourite and to me is like the heart of the poem.. :)
    I never thought so hurtful this way
    When i thinking of myself it linking to you
    I hurting myself whenever i hurt you (Report) Reply

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