The Space Between Relaxation And Sleep Poem by Kaleb Falin

The Space Between Relaxation And Sleep

Rating: 5.0


Flecks of sunlight permeate,
The contours,
Of the slight slits,
Of my eyes,
I am floating in pixels of reddish orange,
With a black back drop,
In some sort of daydream freefall,
Sinking into a sea of grass,

Wednesday, June 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 September 2014

You are good with words and sentence structure. A well articulated and brilliantly penned work of art. Brief but highly imaginative. I enjoyed this poem so much. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

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