The Stone And I Poem by Smoky Hoss

The Stone And I

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I knealt low.
Getting a better look.
Wanting to pick it up, yet
feeling unworthy.
The simple small stone,
so plain yet precious,
having been here for eons, and I
only for a mere passing spell.
A temporary stature
is my lot-
Forever grounded is
the little stone's-
A question beyond measure
arrises like a fog:
Which has more soul
the sacred stone or mere me?
Together the stone and I
await the answer-
The little stone of course
has much more time, than I-

Sunday, December 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 20 January 2020

Forgot! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list

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Susan Williams 20 January 2020

Now I feel guilty. As a child and as a teen, I was fascinated by rocks and take samples from everywhere we visited in the U.S. I did wonder what events made them and what different minerals might compose it... Rocks are indeed a magnet for wonder. But I loaded my parent's car trunk with so many rocks that my Dad claimed they affected the gas mileage! ! ! So out they went. Far from their birthplace...

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Glen Kappy 10 December 2019

Hey, Smoky! Hope this finds you well in all ways. You hit on two themes in this I revisit again and again—our mortality and things too often overlooked and/or undervalued. Take care, brother. -Glen

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Lawerence Mize 02 December 2019

Smoky, no soul in the stone. It's all you.

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Kim Barney 01 December 2019

Smoky, my friend, I am worried about you. It sounds as if you might be getting stoned!

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