The Streets Are Calling Poem by kelvin karani

The Streets Are Calling

Rating: 4.5


I hear their cry
Dejected and lonely they are
Wanting company; our company
They are not there anymore
Those couples that were always present
From end to end its clear
Oh! Wake up and lets go dear
Come out of your layers of beddings
In which you hide from cold of loneliness
And i will come out too
From these blankets that suffocate
Hand in hand we will walk
To and fro on these lonely streets
Lit by smiling moon and stars.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom J. Mariani 26 April 2009

You both need to 'wake up' Kelvin. I'm not sure what neighborhood you sleep in. There are reasons no one is out walkin' hand-in-hand or otherwise. Unless you're lving next door to Walden Pound, stay inside and sleep on the floor to avoid stray shots. Otherewise, I liked the romantic tone of your poem.

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