The Sun Cried Poem by muideen olawale jimoh

The Sun Cried

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The strong is frail

The warmed seeks succor

The ship sets sail

With the captain still at the harbor



The clock goes tick-tock

But time is motionless

Ahead of me seems a rock

Alas! Behold my eyes sees nothingness.



The stars travel down to my room

And my soul is still devoid of light

My world seems swept clean with a broom

And I can’t seem to trace my right.



For you I cried, the sun cried

My life can never be the same again

Cos with you I wish to die

And on my body feel the pain of rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 15 October 2009

Interesting piece with abab cdcd efef ghgh rhyming scheme.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 October 2009

very much imaginative...i liked the style and the usage of short crisp lines...good work Muideen...10 remove that 'sees' there

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