The Surfer Poem by Paul Warren

The Surfer

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Gasping he sucked in deep
To breathe after made his survival complete
The wave rolled on and left him there
Riding the waves made it devil may care

The sun warmed him lying on his board
Another tick off the bucket list was scored
As he paddled to the distant shoreline
Feeling great and ready for the next item he'd find.

© Paul Warren Poetry

Wednesday, December 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beach
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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 18 December 2019

a nice imagery full score

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Paul Warren

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ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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