The Unknown Poem by Ayisha Ibrahim

The Unknown



Memories too precious to forget
too distant to remember
Cloudy sky
Thunder rumbling near yet so far
Children anticipating rainfall
Adults preparing their vessels
How familiarly different yet so much alike
All awaiting the unknown
The unknown...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 23 August 2007

This poet really worth a good height in writes Thunder rumbling near yet so far Children anticipating rainfall Adults preparing their vessels (How wonderful... imagess..)

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Lylyanna Pilewski 21 September 2006

i like it like a story form and old town. yeah idk. Lylyanna

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Simple Simon 21 September 2006

The unknown may be a storm or flood, which takes a toll of lives. Life is also like that.

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Chukuemeka Akpe 18 September 2006

Very nice poem Ayisha. I could not help but feel a sense of foreboding in your poem, albeit, disguised.

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Aashish Ameya 18 September 2006

very nice thought in ur poem

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