The Wholeness Poem by Prabir Gayen

The Wholeness

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- Inner Realm -
-Wholeness-

Thou wert in my mind as pristine unity,
One without second a non dual self,
Thou wert in every trying time of my mind,
With my breath thou flow and with no mind calm.
The beauty that lulled my mind thou nourish.
It is sober shrine that shoved me incised.
My hope rose and hopeless mite dismantled.
My snooty self looked to shine with poetic praise,
With deeper rage it shradded by being correct.
The wholeness broke and surfaced on dewy bed.
I am a being with mindless wave length.
perfection uprise! the unity demise.

The Wholeness
Sunday, September 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jasbir Chatterjee 01 February 2019

The line, I am a being with mindless wave length' sounds the best. Nice pic too...Keep writing and editing your poems. They will sound better.

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Prosanta Mondal 02 June 2019

Thou wert in my mind as pristine unity, One without second a non dual self,

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Shreya Ghosh 23 August 2020

With deeper rage it shraded by being correct. The wholeness broke and surfaced on dewy bed. I am a being with mindless wave length.

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Shreya Ghosh 10 July 2020

Thou wert in my mind as pristine unity, One without second a non dual self, Thou wert in every trying time of my mind, With my breath thou flow and with no mind calm..'''''

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Shreya Ghosh 11 June 2020

With deeper rage it shredded by being correct. The wholeness broke and surfaced on dewy bed.

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Shreya Ghosh 11 June 2020

I am a being with mindless wave length. perfection uprise! the unity demise

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Prosanta Mondal 02 June 2019

With my breath thou flow and with no mind calm. The beauty that lulled my mind thou nourish. It is sober shrine that shoved me incised

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