The Youthfull Boldness Poem by dimitrios galanis

The Youthfull Boldness

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Physical the movements, without any precautions
to set her tall skinny body nude.
Fanning cast brown hair in statuesque shoulders.
The tight sharp breast protrusions flickered slightly
as she hastened to hide her proud puberty
amid the night's wrinkled sea where the moon, time ago sank,
was struggling vainly to keep itself still.
The twin all-white buttocks were found soon
by the dived moon's glow
and set themselves immediately
in a worthily for grace compete with.
Stunned the two lucky of the unexpected scene,
which was unfolding in front of them
as an on the coast and waters Αphrodite's Epiphany,
enjoyed the magie spread by the youthfull boldness.
Sweet, marvelous, windy presence of Eros itself
ready to admit.

The Youthfull Boldness
Wednesday, December 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote it at 17.9.2015 having in mind a personal expierience
described in the poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 25 January 2016

A vivid and vibrant picture, poetically painted in the mind of the reader.

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Dimitrios Galanis 25 January 2016

A personal experience but everyone's too may have been.Thanks.

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Tim Wilds 06 December 2015

I love the imagery and how it paints a picture. I closed my eyes after each line and could visualize it all. Very well written. Thank you for sharing it with us!

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Dimitrios Galanis 07 December 2015

Thank you so much for your kind words.

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