Me, Myself and I

Rookie - 2 Points (12 october 1974)

Then You Left


So then you left…


In a heap, lying on the floor,

I lie, panting, wanting so much more,

For you have all but gone,

The fairytale is over...

And I start to humm our song,

The erotic thoughts I still think,

Our glasses we drank from,

Are still lying in the sink,

Your smell on my clothes,

Makes me start to think,

But now your gone,

I hear the door slam,

And the taxi pull away,

And its all over,

Over before I had time to blink,

What the hell happened? ?

Or did I say out-loud what I think? ?

Submitted: Thursday, November 18, 2010
Edited: Sunday, September 04, 2011

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  • Bronze Star - 5,755 Points Amitava Sur (9/11/2014 8:30:00 PM)

    So emotional so hearting is the poem in deed. The perso whom you love so much when gets parted it is pearcing the heart and mind.... very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,574 Points Abekah Emmanuel (9/7/2014 11:59:00 PM)

    It pierces the heart my fello poet, yes! when the person with whom you share your joy and sorrow with, suddenly disappears. It happens often, and one must let go of such. Indeed, good friends we have, good friend's we lost. Beautiful and emotional piece of work....well done! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,574 Points Abekah Emmanuel (9/7/2014 11:59:00 PM)

    It pierces the heart my fello poet, yes! when the person with whom you share your joy and sorrow with, suddenly disappears. It happens often, and one must let go of such. Indeed, good friends we have, good friend's we lost. Beautiful and emotional piece of work....well done! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,016 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/21/2013 1:03:00 AM)

    A fairly good poem, but it didn't meet my expectation of what I wanted from 'the most popular poet'! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anonymous Logician (10/13/2013 10:53:00 PM)

    I like it, I really do - quite a powerful emotion conveyed here.
    Harmless suggestion: Correct your to you're in the following line:
    But now your gone,
    It may flow a little smoother for meticulous folks like me if you do. Still, though, thumbs up otherwise. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,273 Points Patricia Grantham (6/27/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    A very nice straight to the heart of the matter love
    poem. Where did love go wrong after a beautiful
    meet. Loved and lost. i invite you to read my poems
    Love Seesaw and Love Potion. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jennifer Louise Johnson (9/19/2012 1:48:00 AM)

    Is it possible that Me, Myself and I became popular because of your name Me, Myself and I which is a famous movie in America, and if people are searching google for it - they will see your profile. Maybe you should try to go with your real name- and see the real love for your work. - It is fair also that way for others. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 60 Points Natasa To (9/10/2012 6:37:00 AM)

    The sad poem that i love. The following line that i read, pls check it again for an error
    ...The erotic thoughts I still think, ... (Report) Reply

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