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(12 october 1974)

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Then You Left

So then you left…

In a heap, lying on the floor,

I lie, panting, wanting so much more,

For you have all but gone,

The fairytale is over...

And I start to humm our song,

The erotic thoughts I still think,

Our glasses we drank from,

Are still lying in the sink,

Your smell on my clothes,

Makes me start to think,

But now your gone,

I hear the door slam,

And the taxi pull away,

And its all over,

Over before I had time to blink,

What the hell happened? ?

Or did I say out-loud what I think? ?

Submitted: Thursday, November 18, 2010
Edited: Sunday, September 04, 2011

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  • marvin brato (10/23/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Nice one...expressive!

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  • Khairul Ahsan (10/21/2013 1:03:00 AM)

    A fairly good poem, but it didn't meet my expectation of what I wanted from 'the most popular poet'!

  • Anonymous Logician (10/13/2013 10:53:00 PM)

    I like it, I really do - quite a powerful emotion conveyed here.
    Harmless suggestion: Correct your to you're in the following line:
    But now your gone,
    It may flow a little smoother for meticulous folks like me if you do. Still, though, thumbs up otherwise.

  • Geetha Jayakumar (9/22/2013 10:21:00 AM)

    Beautiful one. Liked reading it.

  • Ramesh Rai (7/29/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    nice one. keep it up.

  • Soumita Sarkar (6/30/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    liked it................i invite you to read my poems.Thanks.

  • Patricia Grantham (6/27/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    A very nice straight to the heart of the matter love
    poem. Where did love go wrong after a beautiful
    meet. Loved and lost. i invite you to read my poems
    Love Seesaw and Love Potion.

  • Renee Maritz (9/21/2012 4:59:00 AM)

    like it! ........... :)

  • Jennifer Louise Johnson (9/19/2012 1:48:00 AM)

    Is it possible that Me, Myself and I became popular because of your name Me, Myself and I which is a famous movie in America, and if people are searching google for it - they will see your profile. Maybe you should try to go with your real name- and see the real love for your work. - It is fair also that way for others.

  • Nurain Ali-balogun (9/17/2012 10:35:00 PM)

    The sab part of lost love. Lovely write.

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