Lorenzo Costigliolo

Rookie (Western Hemisphere)

! These Eyes Are Watching You - Poem by Lorenzo Costigliolo

...see your words
verbal manifestation of thoughts
portraits painted with syllables
of sensuous simile and meaningful metaphor

not critic but who assimilates random thoughts
cast about like chaff in the swirling wind
no object of idolatry
no persecuting executioner
no special one from any special land
no name, no face, no special place
ubiquitous with comment or without –

just a silent voice that speaks its mind
shadow of your spirit
wisp of your very breath
exhaled for all to breathe

your vigilant sentinal


Comments about ! These Eyes Are Watching You by Lorenzo Costigliolo

  • Rookie Tai Chi Italy (10/30/2009 10:51:00 PM)

    I lick it! lol highly perceptive.

    Smiling at you

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2009



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