Think And Decide. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Think And Decide.

Rating: 5.0

What buys us love, what buys us fame,
Who whispers sweet notings in our ear,
and who opens doors and breaks down walls,
will it turn our dreams into shining stars?

Then why we still cling to our pride and prejudice,
why our egos fueling the fire of disdain,
does it not scorn and mock to self?
We only bring harm again and again.

Time is ripe to break free from these chains of hate,
And let love and compassion heal our fate,
this only seems the possible way to find some grace,
And learn to live together in a better place.

Tuesday, December 5, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: introspection,war and peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 05 December 2023

This poem is excellent and perfect....thank u... friend..

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Brian De-Costa 09 December 2023

WOnderful poem.

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Sandra Feldman 06 December 2023

Brilliantly and Beautifully written! 5****

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Sandra Feldman 06 December 2023

So true, so deep, so right! A poem full of hope and light. In these dark times.

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Richard Wlodarski 05 December 2023

A very fine poem, Asim! Thanks for commenting on my poems, but PH has been deactivating some of them, so I can't see your comments. Let's see if they deactivate my poetic response to your poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 December 2023

Bravo Asim Very enjoyable TFS

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