Shady ElShafie

Rookie - 10 Points (Russia, St-Petersburg)

This And That! - Poem by Shady ElShafie

So, all is one, and one is all.
So, one will be all.
So, one will be not alone.
Words from the heaven stated the one
but some words disguising as the devil to the whole not to one
words metaphorically incorrect
subliminaly, insanly in a duet
targets the low's conscious awarness
undergo's their secrets in a constraining mind
Yet all resemble pieze of the all, and one is the key
so, how and who is this and that?


Comments about This And That! by Shady ElShafie

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/18/2010 10:13:00 AM)

    An all in all poem. Well rounded write. Enjoyed the read! ; D (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Chitra - (5/13/2010 11:03:00 AM)

    wonderfully written...again with a message! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points KYLEE BARTZ (5/11/2010 4:23:00 AM)

    great poem. i would give it a 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 60 Points Godspower Oshodin (5/6/2010 8:45:00 AM)

    Good Diction and proper Enjabment....Cool poem Dude! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 6, 2010


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