Thou' Trapped In Wrong Surroundings (Free-Versed Poem) Poem by Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Thou' Trapped In Wrong Surroundings (Free-Versed Poem)

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Addicted to dream
Although failed many times
But some of them came true
So want to dream more
Without a dream can't find any aim
Without aim can't move further
Although slipped many times
But some times succeed to forward
So want to put effort again
Although trapped in wrong surroundings
But only positivity of family
Always motivates to keep on trying
As this is the way to teach
A lesson to negative factors
That I'm not discouraged
But grew stronger
As so much hindrances can't
Affect me to stop
And I keep on enjoying the life
Which is beyond the dream of theirs
As a peaceful time can be caught
By a mind that sustain confidence
And confidence remains where
Positive approach sustained.
An approach to win the competition
With superior competence
Otherwise the fulfilled dreams
Can't give a peaceful reward
Rather the memories of victory
Will remind inferiority
And your celebration turns into
Celebration of others' superiority.
Those others whom you wanted to defeat
And believe you did.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 19 February 2008

In spite of obstacles, one must carry on and fulfill one's potential. Bravo for this poem.

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Madhubani, Bihar, India
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