Thoughts Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

Thoughts

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are rushing, quickly it are flying away,
it are swelling and are collecting
with clouds on the forehead,
like in the sky


filled yesterday and with today
of trouble and concerns, joy and sorrows
harassing, tormenting and the ones
what are comforting for you and other



our thoughts are working non-stop,
even are driving nightmares with the night or
blissful dreams, in order that only in the morning,
anew to try to tune the organism, with optimism

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Barbara Korynt 24 June 2009

Our dreams are reflecting our thoughts. If we are optimistically 'tuned', our dreams also will be optimistic. It can confirm majority from us. Good idea and excellent workmanship. I like it very much it poem. :)

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