Three Words Or Is It Five Words? Poem by David Harris

Three Words Or Is It Five Words?

Rating: 5.0


Those three little words you say,
I love you,
brings a face full of smiles,
and happiness to my world.
However, those five words you say,
I don’t want you anymore,
brings eyes full of tears,
and sorrow, sadness and fears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
JoAnn McGrath 17 May 2007

Hmmmmm...I think I'll say goodnight here on this one because I'm loss for words

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 May 2007

David... Are we Positive and negative here, always be positive my friend..10

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Ahhhhh....David, i think you have just perfectly re-defined the dueling masks of the opera...aka.... :) ....) : . Ilike this a lot..Succinctly profound work. FjR

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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