To Me, This Life Looks Like ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

To Me, This Life Looks Like ~

Rating: 5.0


They say ~ life is beautiful
And I say it disguises like a mirage
No less than a spider's web
It spreads desires of our body
And demands catch all the time
It's sticky like silk is a hunting tool for the wishes.

They say ~ life is wonderful
And I say how I wonder what it is
A soul inside the body playing tug of war
Both are competing for a win-win situation.

They say ~ Life is worth living
And I say it inches towards death dancing all the way
In three stages, painting the world
Then trying to rub it off.

They say ~ Life on earth is a test
And I agree to it with no other purpose seen around
Indeed, it takes us through the narrow tunnel
Transition to another life through the death

To me, this life looks like ~
Passing of a camel through the needle's eye
Pure like honey, odorless like olive oil,
Fresh like ice and innocent as a dove.

Thursday, November 11, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Walter 11 November 2021

Life is larger than our wishes.

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Deepak S S 11 November 2021

Great similes to sum-up life. Adorable 5 **

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Darren Jkoeryo 11 November 2021

Life is worth living and enjoying. I believe in lively life.

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Zumas Millamo 11 November 2021

They say ~ life is wonderful And I say how I wonder what it is A soul inside the body playing tug of war Both are competing for a win-win situation.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 November 2021

Brilliantly written especially the last line Bravo!

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me poet yeps poet 12 November 2021

Pure like honey, odorless like olive oil, Fresh like ice and innocent as a dove. See poetry and life depend on who said what I always say forget soul be sole make a pirposeless life whole dig not for it holes

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2021

To my Poem List with top, top stars. So beautifully penned. Loved the metaphors and allegories.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2021

A brilliant poem Dr. Asim ji. Profound, insightful and philosophical.

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Mamta S 11 November 2021

Insightful poem with great depth, impeccable flow of words makes it more special.

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Sandra Feldman 11 November 2021

A wonderful poem full of transmittable ideas of depth and beauty, Poetic and individual philosophy at its best, A magnificent work, deeply forgettable!

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