Tomorrow Poem by Gabriel Crow

Tomorrow

Rating: 5.0


I'll see you all tomorrow
And i'll see you all today
I guess what i'm say'n is i'm not going away
Yesterday has come and gone
It was fun and gay
But tomorrow is tomorrow
And that is all i want to say

Tomorrow i dream
I dream
Of someting better than this
What you all have
It has not started yet
But it will and when it does
You will be cralling on the floor

I can not stand it
But i must
I can not stand it but i will

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Much emotional verve, presented here...your abstract delivery works well... RAGE, SORROW, WARNING, PERSISTENCE..all co-ordinated so well here... FjR

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