Travel, Where To? Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Travel, Where To?

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Travel,
Travel's the lore,
Pilgrimage shore to shore,
Life and yon that no one knows well
Where to!
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Cinquains | 08.06.14 |

Monday, June 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 10 June 2019

Magnificent, Aniruddha! There is the way to travel without moving a millimeter in this physical universe.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 June 2019

So well said, and also, the journey in one particular life could be no more than a few millimeters. Thank you Mj Lemon.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 June 2019

I TRAVEL A LOT HENCE FOR MY POEMS EACH ONE I GATHER A PLOT U R OF EXPERIENCE A NATURAL POT OR A VAST PLOT of your land of birth

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 June 2019

O my dear Poet's Poet, pray bear in mind I'm only a poet because I do write some poems. I'm not sure I've understood what you say. You see deliberate vagueness is an aspect of poetry, double meanings, this or that, under-punctuation and the like, but I do not subscribe to it. My background before I started writing poetry, to be precise, still stands.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2019

The core of life! ! More to learn. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 June 2019

Yes I see your point, thanks for visiting, Edward Louis.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 June 2019

Life and yon that no one knows well Where to! .....yes, so true. No one can say where has to go. A beautiful philosophical poem is astutely shared. TFS.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 June 2019

Thank you Kumarmani for your appreciation. You have any comments on the piece as a Cinquain? Please feel free to comment.

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