Travel,
Travel's the lore,
Pilgrimage shore to shore,
Life and yon that no one knows well
Where to!
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Cinquains | 08.06.14 |
I TRAVEL A LOT HENCE FOR MY POEMS EACH ONE I GATHER A PLOT U R OF EXPERIENCE A NATURAL POT OR A VAST PLOT of your land of birth
O my dear Poet's Poet, pray bear in mind I'm only a poet because I do write some poems. I'm not sure I've understood what you say. You see deliberate vagueness is an aspect of poetry, double meanings, this or that, under-punctuation and the like, but I do not subscribe to it. My background before I started writing poetry, to be precise, still stands.
The core of life! ! More to learn. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Life and yon that no one knows well Where to! .....yes, so true. No one can say where has to go. A beautiful philosophical poem is astutely shared. TFS.
Thank you Kumarmani for your appreciation. You have any comments on the piece as a Cinquain? Please feel free to comment.
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I would like to translate this poem
Magnificent, Aniruddha! There is the way to travel without moving a millimeter in this physical universe.
So well said, and also, the journey in one particular life could be no more than a few millimeters. Thank you Mj Lemon.