to all who were my critics
and still are
When I vanish
in flesh
in soul
in spirit
in touch of yours
and in your sight
don't dig a hole
lies on earth
but a hole
deep down in your heart
with memories
pumping as your heartbeat
with thoughts
beating as your pulse
that is really good! ! ! ! ! i think it is a good way of saying that when your gone you hope to still be here I liked it, you should check your in box in between posting new poems! !
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with memories pumping as your heartbeat with thoughts beating as your pulse..... what an cheritable dream with all blessings for the critics.... good write i am impressed.....10 read mine jackson is no more and luminous star gone....thanks