{ Trip To Hell }: : : : : : : : : : : F.O.R.M. Blitz. Poem by Manohar Bhatia

{ Trip To Hell }: : : : : : : : : : : F.O.R.M. Blitz.



[“Trip To Hell”]

[Trip in giant wheel
trip of death
death personified
death visited
visited by many
visited by daring
daring youngsters
daring children
children thrilled
children excited
excited going to hell
excited to get killed
killed a bird on way
killed the ego
ego is dangerous
ego is bad
bad is good
bad is infectious
infectious influences
infectious for everything
everything is going right
everything is for everyone
everyone is shouting
everyone is red-faced
red-faced monkey
red-faced owl
owl flied in air
owl gets caught in tree
caught in the net
caught in the act
act and go
act and blow
blow in wind
blow in seat
seat of power
seat of individuality
individuality dangerous
individuality also supreme
supreme moments
supreme feelings
feelings of death
feelings of fear
fear of fall
fear of sadness
sadness moving in
sadness hits hell
hell and earth
hell to heaven
heaven.....
earth... ]

- The End-

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The BLITZ poem is well named as fifty short lines are read in rapid fire fashion.

This form was invented by poet Robert Keim in 2008.
The format is unique- twenty-four couplets, each line beginning with the last word of the previous couplet, ending with two single word lines, the last word of lines 48 and 47, respectively. The lines are short and fast, but consist of at least two words (other than the last two lines) , and most are common or recognizable phrases. The blitz lends itself well to being read aloud.

There is no meter or rhyme used in a blitz. Though fast-paced, the concept that the poet wants to convey will be revealed slowly throughout the piece, as less meaningful phrases give way to those more relevant when taken in total. Continuous repetition through the poem keeps the reader (or listener) interested and allows for a quick cadence. The end is a poignant comment on the concept.

Note: : Outsourced the description with courtesy of Jack Huber of Wichita (USA) All thanks to my mentor, Jack Huber, who taught me to write F.O.R.M. poetry and I successfully wrote the above poem: : BLITZ.

Manohar Bhatia.
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