Trust Poem by Afrooz Jafarinoor

Trust



In the snowstorm, I'm walking, seeing nothing
I won't get lost, I know, as it's your trail I follow.
The white snowflakes fall over my head
I have no doubt, you're shading my head.
In the snow on the road, your footprints remain
Like your memories frozen in my brain.
A wolf is howling, the wind is blowing
Evening is falling, a sleepless night is closing!
I mustn't freeze; to warm up, I sing.
' My lips bloom saying your name, ' I sing
And I'm walking faster while I'm singing.
Through my veins, frost is running
But I feel warm as I'm thinking,
Not much of the road is left
And a phantom has so long waited!

Sunday, April 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,love,trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 16 August 2015

Snowcorps I think you meant snowflakes. Perhaps would be better if you changed, your footprint remains, in line 5, to: Your footprints remain. Other than that you did a stellar job!

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 16 August 2015

So much the better, thank you!

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Lyn Paul 13 April 2015

Through my veins, frost is running But I feel warm as I'm thinking......... Great line. Oh to the joy and the release of singing.

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