Turning Poem by David Taylor

Turning

Rating: 5.0


As soft as early morning dew
and sweet like nectar
surrounded by such subtle hues.
Each petal unique
each leaf a shape defined
in seeds’ embryonic mind.
An earthscape of scenes
so sublime
bathed in perpetual sunsets
as turning we can seek.
And in the mind such raptures
do we often find
as pleasures past and future
our dreams are of a dreamlike kind.
And then with shadows
menacing insurgents upon
a blissful scene
we claim the beauty as our own
and seek exclusivity
of that which cannot be assigned
and clutching what is not mine
I crush the dew and nectar
and make a bitter wine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jon Alan 29 September 2007

I agree with Ms. Daffodil's comment, but, without the defining content of the rest of the poem the duality being exposed would not be evident. I love the way you lead us on for the entire poem only to twist the message at the last part of the poem. It is a wonderful and complicated message to impart in any form, and you did it with skill and your usual superb style.

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Dee Daffodil 14 September 2007

I love the last two lines David! I crush the dew and nectar and make a bitter wine. Powerfully descriptive poem...nicely done! Hugs, dee

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