Twin Grazing Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Twin Grazing

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One of this grazing is similar to another,
All plants beside have given their bless,
Bullocks are busy in spite of busy dusk,
Under the highway beauty has attracted.
Pollen has tied up with breeze of evening,
Wild silver flowers have turned brown,
Grazing has brought disappearance of grass,
Brass of moment is seen merged with joy.

This is suitable for pasturage in hope and light,
Twilight leaves its last fall of drops over them,
Twins have born together in this filed beside,

Promise of nice friendship is made in vision,
Seasonal flow has allowed grazing mindfully.
Innocence is painted in eyes of both bullocks.

No tiredness, no worries and no tension are seen,
Let dusk move in dreamland of real highway,
This is twin grazing that has empowered life.

Walking together peacefully is great to achieve,
Even time surrenders before unity to identify.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 March 2018. All rights reserved.

Twin Grazing
Saturday, March 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: animal,beauty,friendship,life,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,12 October 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 10 March 2018

Dear Poet, You have so beautifully tied life giving nature to all living things: 'Twins grazing that has empowered life' Wonderful poem of Life's renaissance. May the birth on this earth never stop! 'Even time surrenders before unity to identify' One cannot help but be mesmerized and enchanted by this beautiful ode to life, birth, peace and beauty so carefully and unforgettably woven by excellent poetry.

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 March 2018

Peaceful coexistence of nature. A wonderful poem filled with lovely imagery.10

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Beautiful poem so well crafted Exellent writing 10+ Kumarmani Mario Odekerken

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Mihaela Pirjol 10 March 2018

A lovely pastoral poem with wonderful poetic depiction and wise words. Such a poem brings serenity and tranquil disposition.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 March 2018

Kumarmani, such a wonderful poem....10+++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 November 2018

A beautiful nature write that dazzles the heart. A wonderful thought on friendship. Well penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 August 2018

A great title and theme. Amazing nature write. Very well crafted..Like the picture attached to the poem.10++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2018

Promise of nice friendship! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 March 2018

Both cattle were grazing together with an unconcern, peacefully that was truly beautiful to see.........Kumarmaniji......and so beautifully scripted........thanks for sharing........10

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Muzahidul Reza 18 March 2018

Grazing has brought disappearance of grass, Brass of moment is seen merged with joy. fantastically penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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