Two Elements Poem by Susan Lacovara

Two Elements

Rating: 5.0


Oil atop water
We floated in shared space
Two elements
Though stirred to mingle
Still unable to mix

You were shiny slick
so much lighter than I
You glided along with the tide
I provided the free ride

Oil atop water
The rainbow effect was deceiving
Pretty but all too toxic
When the coating got into my skin

Sunday, September 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: breaking up
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(09/24/17) The 'clean up' continues. M.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 September 2017

The rainbow effect was deceiving Pretty but all too toxic When the coating got into my skin Wow, what a lovely creation! A marvel of art. 10++++

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