Unborn (Limerick) Poem by Spock the Vegan

Unborn (Limerick)

Rating: 5.0


It was warm there in the womb
Like a soft and watery tomb
And though I was dumb
I sucked on my thumb
Until I was expelled into the cold room

Unborn (Limerick)
Wednesday, November 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mother and child ,baby,birth,coldness,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The hospital scale was especially cold.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 25 September 2016

This is incredible. You have done the impossible- creating humour through a lovely this limerick poem on an unborn or just born child. I thank you, Mr Spock, for sharing such a fine masterpiece. And though I was dumb I sucked on my thumb

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Spock The Vegan 30 September 2016

Thanks a whole lot. Sometimes one comes together nicely.

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Kim Barney 05 November 2015

Did you get stuck in the wrong egg? It looks like you have a third leg! Well, that's not so bad, So don't feel too sad, You just hang it up on a peg!

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Spock The Vegan 30 September 2016

Hummm, I've read some of your limericks. This one is over the top.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2015

Wonderful Limerick shared on birth and thought of fetus. Very wise sharing really...10

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Spock The Vegan 30 September 2016

Thank you veeeeeeeery much.

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