Unfinished Business Poem by Alfred Ramos

Unfinished Business

Rating: 5.0


Hey babe, you can’t leave me this mess
I don’t want to be the prince of loneliness
We got ourselves some unfinished business
It all started when you walked away
When deep inside I wanted you to stay
I really thought you were the one
But already you’re on the run
And I don’t want any part
Of picking up the pieces of a broken heart
Hey babe, I thought we had the key to success
You know me I won’t settle for less
Come back and take care of this unfinished business
Don’t leave me in a foggy haze
Thought you were the road to better days
I was ready to take you anywhere
Had no dreams to follow, I was already there
Who could tell how this would end
I don’t want to break but I’m about to bend
Yes babe, you used to leave me breathless
Our world was surrounded with happiness
Now all we got is this unfinished business

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 04 October 2008

a good poem talking frank and loud... 'Had no dreams to follow, I was already there' - these are a very good lines...good rhyming through out in the write...10

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