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Unity -Part 3- Fire

Raging through the Earth,
Burning everything in sight,
Fire's untamed fury,
Edges to dominance.

The Earth, it's fuel, let's it's spread,
But Water, it's enemy, extinguishes the flames
Air does not take a side. It can help spread the flames,
or it can blow them to nothingness,

Fire unleashes it's worst,
Feared by many, it's power spreads
Faster than the flames themselves.

Supremacy.

Submitted: Saturday, March 13, 2010
Edited: Thursday, March 17, 2011

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  • Zander Pearson (3/14/2010 6:36:00 PM)

    You suggestion is great, but what I was trying to go for was a -ity (or something similar) ending word. Supremacy, Liberality, etc. (I still have to fix 'Emptiness') I might change it though.... I'll think about it. Thx

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  • Cynthia Urich (3/14/2010 6:33:00 PM)

    Zander,

    I really like this on! I see now that you're ending each part with a sort of universal NOUN. To whit: Part V, 'Light' - should end with the word 'ETERNITY, ' though I like the flow of 'ETERNALLY' better.

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