Unload, Make A Move Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Unload, Make A Move



Nor is man poor, nor is he meek,
What's a few notes and coins but dross?
A mental block, success nor loss,
Forget O mind beliefs so freak.
If very life to live ye lack,
Dusty road, dour feet, walking cane,
What use to ye is bus or train?
Better, Bank of all banks ye back.
Op fields around under blue sky,
Cloistered lanes, nor greedy love,
Nor chasing like vultures above,
No money can nature's joy buy.
Causeless casual's the only love,
Throw away all load, make a move.
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Sonnets | 02.11.18 |

Tuesday, February 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,money
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We feel money is comfort, assurance. May be, but money is also a burden. There's nothing like feeling light and care free.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 26 February 2019

excellent poetic expression- Cloistered lanes, nor greedy love, Nor chasing like vultures above, No money can nature's joy buy. Causeless casual's the only love, // love it

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

Thank you Mahtab Bangalee, you feel alike.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 February 2019

Making a movement of happiness through beautiful gazing is definitely interesting. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

Yes, Kumarmani Mahakul, happiness is her with us if we can just so feel and look around.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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